Ok - this is good to see, but you should evaluate these in terms of quality and how you intend to use them (ie transitions, whether you are cutting them down etc). Comment on your use of camera and mise en scene - have you shot as planned on the storyboards?
Still no evaluation or discussion? Are you reading my comments? You're certainly not acting on them! Up to you, but it really makes sense to take note of what I'm saying and act on it, unless you wish to throw away marks?! It's hard to get a sense of how these will look when in a rough cut or final cut, but there appear to be a lot of LSs and ELSs here with too little camera variety. If this is the case, you should consider reshooting some material to create extra shots. Also, you do need to add comments on the use of this setting - thrillers for a mass market need to have very good reasons for being shot on a middle class street in Sussex. You'll need to explain this (perhaps again here) to be sure that you have justified it in terms of your target audience. Have you defined your audience? You need to do this for the final stages of the film and for your audience feedback (essential for the evaluation). Also, you should have muted the sound on these clips - does the external moderator need to hear your banter? I don't think so...
Watch carefully for continuity in these running shots too - you appear to have Dan running from right to left and left to right in the same place? This may make narrative sense, but you need to explain it.
Ok - this is good to see, but you should evaluate these in terms of quality and how you intend to use them (ie transitions, whether you are cutting them down etc). Comment on your use of camera and mise en scene - have you shot as planned on the storyboards?
ReplyDeleteStill no evaluation or discussion? Are you reading my comments? You're certainly not acting on them! Up to you, but it really makes sense to take note of what I'm saying and act on it, unless you wish to throw away marks?!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to get a sense of how these will look when in a rough cut or final cut, but there appear to be a lot of LSs and ELSs here with too little camera variety. If this is the case, you should consider reshooting some material to create extra shots. Also, you do need to add comments on the use of this setting - thrillers for a mass market need to have very good reasons for being shot on a middle class street in Sussex. You'll need to explain this (perhaps again here) to be sure that you have justified it in terms of your target audience. Have you defined your audience? You need to do this for the final stages of the film and for your audience feedback (essential for the evaluation). Also, you should have muted the sound on these clips - does the external moderator need to hear your banter? I don't think so...
Watch carefully for continuity in these running shots too - you appear to have Dan running from right to left and left to right in the same place? This may make narrative sense, but you need to explain it.
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