Thought the framing at some parts was a bit amateur and need to be more considerate, the sound needs a bit of continuity editing and could'nt hear the news report. I enjoyed the clip where he is running to the school. I liked the CCTV camera, but think you should put a time and date overlapping the clip to make it look like a real security camera recording. Liked the idea of the paper swan but needed better framing and longer time to actually read it, but otherwise thought it was a well constructed piece of work. -Max Hilbourne
I found the storyline very easy to follow and also very original , there were lots of good camera skills used and editing worked well.The tracking scene was was used to great effect. Setting and lighting were both very realistic.As the target audience i found your opening very interesting and I think that it would make a really good storyline for a main feature film - Kate
Thought the framing at some parts was a bit amateur and need to be more considerate, the sound needs a bit of continuity editing and could'nt hear the news report. I enjoyed the clip where he is running to the school. I liked the CCTV camera, but think you should put a time and date overlapping the clip to make it look like a real security camera recording. Liked the idea of the paper swan but needed better framing and longer time to actually read it, but otherwise thought it was a well constructed piece of work.
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I found the storyline very easy to follow and also very original , there were lots of good camera skills used and editing worked well.The tracking scene was was used to great effect. Setting and lighting were both very realistic.As the target audience i found your opening very interesting and I think that it would make a really good storyline for a main feature film - Kate
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